A hot-air balloon and a spear aren’t the best tools for hunting. But Bjorn didn’t know that. He was a carpenter, not a hunter.
This is very well written. Tight and focused. It hits all the marks (unlike Bjorn's spears) for a good episode. It is so easy to meander when writing—I think your discipline in this is far greater than my own :)
Thank you! A lot of it is using the editing stage to prune any sentences, paragraphs, or words that don't add to the core plot line.
This is very well written. Tight and focused. It hits all the marks (unlike Bjorn's spears) for a good episode. It is so easy to meander when writing—I think your discipline in this is far greater than my own :)
Thank you! A lot of it is using the editing stage to prune any sentences, paragraphs, or words that don't add to the core plot line.